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When The Script is Bad

“Not every audition comes with sparkling dialogue. But casting isn’t just about the script—it’s about you. So how do you shine, even when the writing is clunky?.. Read More

12 mins
Sep 18

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Not every audition comes with sparkling dialogue. But casting isn’t just about the script—it’s about you. So how do you shine, even when the writing is clunky? Let’s break it down.”

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Not every audition comes with sparkling

dialogue.

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But casting isn't just about the script,

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it's about you.

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So how do you shine even when the

writing is clunky?

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Let's break it down.

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This is casting actor's cast.

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Well, hello, and welcome back to casting

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actor's cast.

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Listen.

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Every actor has been there, right?

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You get a script with dialogue so flat

it sounds like it was written by a robot,

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or jokes, I just don't land, I've been

there, or lines that just feel, I don't

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know, painfully cliche.

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And yet you still have to make it work.

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This, I promise you, is one of the

greatest tests for an actor, how to

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deliver weak writing with strength,

authenticity

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and commitment.

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But there is a secret,

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here's the secret

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casting directors know.

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And the material isn't great.

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They're not waiting for you to

magically fix it.

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What they're waiting for is to see you

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rise above it,

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to make the material playable.

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Make it believable.

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Make it watchable.

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And that's what we're going to tackle

on this episode.

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But first, this is that moment of the

conversation where I get to say thank

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you for tuning into casting actors

cast.

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This is where I usually tell you to go

to the website, casting actors cast all

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one word dot com.

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You're going to find all kinds of

interesting material there available

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for you.

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One is a book that I wrote on doing

voice over work.

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It's called conversation pieces out of

the studio, the voiceover workshop for

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professional actors.

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You'll find that by filling out the

form that says dive into the talent

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pool, you can also leave a comment, you

can leave a review, you can leave a

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thumbs up.

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Whatever you want, that's there.

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And I would love for you to make

yourself available for that.

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I don't do anything with your email

address.

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By the way, ask for your email address

in your name.

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That's it.

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I might, on rare occasions, send out an

announcement about an upcoming episode

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or something like that.

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But I promise you, I don't abuse the

privilege of contacting you.

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I don't at all.

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Also there's my new book, as i'll call

bookedit.

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The actor's playbook for getting cast.

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That's available as well, as well as

jeff's jots, which are corresponding

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show notes to each of the episodes.

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So there's a lot there to check out.

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And it just helps me know that you are

out there when you respond.

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And if you do respond by.

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Perhaps you want to leave a review on

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or Spotify,

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any way in which you can let others

know about the podcast

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would just mean the world to me.

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The podcasts are released every

Thursday at one pm.

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I've been doing it for several years

now.

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This is episode 385,

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I think.

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And so I'm still going strong.

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I'm still Loving doing this, and your

support keeps me going.

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It kind of just is

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the most

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useful

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motivator for me is when you reach out

to me, and I appreciate so much.

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All of the fantastic male actress have

sensed to me, the positive thoughts.

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It just is just an amazing thing that's

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Ok, I'm done talking about job.

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I'm talking about this stuff.

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Ok,

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let's jump into the subject.

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Now

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I want you to understand that your job

isn't to fix a script.

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So when you get some bad writing,

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you're not responsible

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making adjustments to it.

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You are the interpreter

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of the material.

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You're not the creator.

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And so it's really important

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to make it

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That's the job.

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I can say it in another way, you're not

a script doctor.

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So don't rewrite, don't comment, don't

apologize

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your job is to bring the words to life

as written, even if they are clunky.

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And believe me,

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there's not.

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Every piece of material out there is

fabulous.

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So let's think about what casting

directors think.

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I can tell you what I think.

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I say to myself, if this actor can make

bad writing work, imagine what they'll

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do with a good script.

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That's true.

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I think a way to help you with this is

to find the humanity,

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find the humanity that lives inside of

that script, even the clunky one.

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Every line, no matter how weak,

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can come from a very real human being.

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So if you search for intention,

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search for the subtext.

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You know, subtex is what you are

thinking or feeling while you're saying

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something else.

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So intention and subtext,

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or you could even just look for a

natural tone

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to lift those flat words that the

script is giving you.

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Here's an example, instead of saying, I

love you

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like it's kind of pasted in,

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and find what your character is really

doing, find what your character is

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really feeling.

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Are they convincing?

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Are they trying to be reassuring?

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Are they confessing?

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And if you lean into connection, if the

words feel thin,

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then double down on your scene.

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Partner,

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authentic eye contact and listening

elevate every clumsy piece of dialogue

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you're going to come across.

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So i'll give you an example.

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Because for a while I was working on a

soap opera called another world, an

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NBC.

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Soap.

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And soap operas often are ridiculed for

their wristwriting.

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But you know what?

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They still connect with audiences.

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Why?

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Because actors commit fully to the

relationship,

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not the words

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committing to the relationship,

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not the words.

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Somebody write that down.

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That was really, really good.

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I think you might benefit from that.

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Also, when you have a script that the

writing is just not kind of happening

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for you,

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the phrase I like to use is clarity

wins.

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So don't layer in unnecessary subtext,

or try to do clever tricks to hide the bad

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writing or bad moments.

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If you can keep your delivery clean and

simple and clear,

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you're going to find it that it is not

a painful experience.

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Because the goal is make it easy easy

for the audience to follow this story,

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no matter how weak the script is,

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it's about the story.

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So I got a practice tool for you.

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I want you to grab a script from a

hallmark holiday movie,

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or a daytime, so per, even a high

school play.

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And I want you to perform it two ways

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way.

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Number one, as written,

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but I want you to lean into honesty

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and connection.

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Number two, over complicating with

actor tricks.

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I want you to compare the two

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over complicated

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all kinds of actor tricks to make it

work, or just clean sincere honesty.

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I promise you, the honest version

always feels stronger.

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It really does.

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You can do this with just about any

script.

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But those scripts that feel like

they're kind of more challenging is the

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one that I think makes sense for you to

check out.

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Now I've got some follow up responses,

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and my call to action

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it's coming up right after this.

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Welcome back.

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So listen the next time you're handed a

bad script or a script that you're just not

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relating to the material.

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just don't roll your eyes.

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I want you to see it as a chance to

shine.

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If you can play truthfully

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with weak material,

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you'll prove you're a reliable,

bookable actor.

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You really will.

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Now, some of the projects that we've

been casting, for example, we send out

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the script.

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And then, many times, not always, but

many times, we'll get a pass on the

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project from the actor because they

say, I'm not responding to the script.

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Now, whether that's

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absolutely true or not, or it's just

kind of a nice way to say they don't.

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Like, it's

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really interesting that if you have

that experience, or have had that experience

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really analyze why you're not

responding to the material.

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I'm not trying to convince you to take

the audition or take the job.

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I am saying, investigate a little bit

further.

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It's not just a one read and then

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it's not much.

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It doesn't do anything for me.

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You're allowed to do that, of course.

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But if you come across a bad script,

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a script that's weak or cheesy or

predictable or even cringeworthy,

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my suggestion and my homework

assignment, is to record yourself

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performing it with total sincerity and

focus on connection.

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Then, of course, I want you to watch it

back.

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If you believe yourself,

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you know what

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casting directors will do.

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That's absolutely true.

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So the next time you have the challenge

of obtaining a script that's not doing

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much for you that you really are having

trouble responding to, that's a fantastic

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to try to make it work in your process.

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You see, the actor's technique

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can really take a script that doesn't

quite work and really make it truthful.

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Make it usable.

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Make it

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tangible,

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so that you can be known as that actor

who can do anything.

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I just heard that the other day.

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Pat was saying, gosh, I love this actor

so much.

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They can do anything.

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Be that actor.

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So listen.

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I hope you've enjoyed the episode.

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If you know someone when that could

benefit from this episode, please pass

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it along.

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And once again, I appreciate any kind

of review.

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Thumbs up.

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Whatever you can do and don't forget.

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We're also on YouTube.

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You can check out all of these videos

on YouTube.

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If that's what you want to do.

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You want to see me doing these

podcasts, you're welcome to it.

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Thanks again so much.

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I'm Geoffrey driesback.

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